Friday, February 19, 2010

How Lonely Do You Feel? by Vidushi Khera

I have always been a 'poem' guy..write my own stuff..(but burned it all once)..haven't really started off writing apart from the odd ones here and there..Now Vidushi Khera is one poet that i would like to meet..came across her poems a few years back on poemhunter.com. Brilliant!!! i should be the last person on this planet to comment on any poems..forget the structure..forget the scheme...forget the emotional depth and blah..blah..the poems just made me feel at peace..an inexplicable sense of something..but something positive...and i'd like to leave it at that.. :)
So jus putting up one of her poems..."How Lonely Do You Feel?"

When times are bad and you have no friends
When the hopes of life lead to dead ends
When all your surroundings have nothing to give
And you can’t imagine life the way you live
When on your knees you bend and you kneel
How lonely do you feel?

When time goes by and you can’t keep pace
When the world laughs at your weary face
When all that you thought had belonged to you
Turns into trash, your happiness too
When life takes the fruit and leaves the peel
How lonely do you feel?

When all those things that once were yours
Go by like the ticking hours
When you’ve got nothing, no one to turn to
When all your people have betrayed you
When you are left with no joy, no zeal
How lonely do you feel?

When life is more of a terror than a test
When you get nothing though you try your best
When you are numb and you find not a wound healing
When you are a bird without any wings
When in the game of life you’ve lost the deal
How lonely do you feel?

When you find a person in such a state
Go up to him, do not wait
Let this question go on like a wheel
Ask him, “How lonely do you feel? ”

3 comments:

Hanging Soul said...

wow.....this was amazing.....someone writing about my poetry.....

I thank you very much for your words of appreciation dear!!

*humbled*

VidZ

Unknown said...

hey this is a gr8 poem..gud work Vidz.. keep it up.. do let me knw if u another one...

Manzar

Gantulga said...

that's a good one. i really like it. could become a great song btw.
good luck :)